With my new story (started Aug. 1, 86 pages complete) I'm uncovering it layer by layer. Like all things layered (cabbages, lettuce) not every leaf is perfect. Sometimes, there are holes. Sometimes, a nasty surprise. Sometimes, perfection.
I usually write clean first drafts. But, as they say, each story is different, and this one is messy. My heroine is reactive, my hero doesn't have enough motivation. Until this weekend, which I spent with most of my writing group at a wonderful retreat, I didn't see these flaws. Or the non-mention of eye & hair color of my two main protagonists. Or. . .well, you get the idea. So now I'm regrouping, beefing up the weak areas and thinking whole picture instead of what the next scene will be. It will be better, stronger and tighter. I even found the perfect place for the first sex scene, which has been a problem in the past.
And I was reminded of an old story, which, after a cursory read-through last night, reminded me of how good it is. It's time for it to make the rounds again. It's time for a good, old pirate/virgin mother story to be heard.
Writing is easy.
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YAY!!!!!!!!!! I love the pirate/virgin mother story. There is much rejoicing!!!!!!!!!!
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